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Almost SonnetRain-slicked streets glow under candlelight lamps Burning bright, halogen yellow and white. Paved bodies intertwine- stretch languid ramps To caress the ground below in moonlight. What seems bleak is a cityscape alive, Adonais and Venus in stone and steel. Oh, a twisted concrete soul may still thrive Dreaming of light fingers, will upon wheel. In Death\'s dream kingdom our streets can feel As we\'re numb and mute, the city reveals. Almost Sonnet
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FeintRolling a little black ball of opium Rolling it back and forth, back and forth with the wet, soft underside of your tongue you speak in electric syllables.
The salty, sour, sweet taste of chocolate or sweat almost disappears for a second when you\'re shooting off 9mm words and the recoil is driving you down to meet the carpet. Feint
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Mandatory Angst and MelonsI have always hoped in vain that when I wake tomorrow everything will be vastly different, epic in a way that would put even the old myths to shame. Something _obviously_ meaningful,
romantic, truly painful, truly beautiful. A world where demons are externalized
and when vanquished, will teach plain lessons rather than the whispered half-truths that we can only assume to learn coping with, raging against, the confines of our own instinct, humanity, mind and soul. Sometimes I want to drag my life out across cinderblocks stacked unevenly, half-sunken in a mudd Mandatory Angst and Melons
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Miss HavishamEight-legged mother Lord of the flies Webbed till they smother, Suffocate and die.
One insect\'s devil Another\'s devil slays So through dark revels A matron she stays. Miss Havisham
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Serenity in Poet Formthere is no stencil with splintered pen to write
on cobwebs and moonlight.
to print

daffodils and lilies on translucent fair and whisper lullabies
to the beautiful ones;
stranded. between band aids and bullet holes
under this butterfly fence. Serenity in Poet Form
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Current Residence: Colorado
Interests: Reading, gaming, whatever works.
Favourite movie: Fear and Loathing or Fight Club
Favourite band or musician: A Perfect Circle
Favourite poet or writer: Percy Bysshe Shelley, Poe, T.S. Eliot
Operating System: I wouldn't call it an "operating" system
Favourite cartoon character: Bill the Cat- Bloom County, Outland
Tools of the Trade: A lucky pen that never runs out of ink

Email: gray_crane@hotmail.com

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~-blackscarling- Aug 6, 2003, 12:52:41 PM

What a beautiful comment.
And thanks very much to the compliment of a fave addition.

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Look. Pink bunnies.

!shefb0yrd Aug 6, 2003, 12:03:56 PM

Much obliged for the comment and positive feedback, no concern that it was 'late' as opposed to the first few, it still means a lot to me. Thanks!

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looks like someone is taking the internet seriously

~graeme Aug 6, 2003, 11:30:00 AM

u make good commetns! thank you again!

~graeme Aug 3, 2003, 7:28:07 AM

thanks again for comment. yes i do have music for that one, real old skool rock music ala led zeppelin! woo!
keep up the cool stuff here. u have some interesting ideas, and you manipulate the language in quite a clever way